Jan 242007
 

Lately, I’ve been writing a ton of food reviews and posting them on www.yelp.com. After visiting a restaurant, I try to write my review within the first 48 hours because the impression is still fresh in my mind. Below is the structure I use to write my reviews. Hope this helps.

In order to write a good, concise review, you will need to include a few elements such as a summary, a critical assessment, and an analysis of the work.

Establish the facts upfront. Give your readers a description of the topic you are going to review. What is your overall perspective?

Once you’ve answered those questions, you can write about what strikes you as interesting. What’s so unique about them anyway? What is its relevance and why should they care? 

After you’ve analyzed the work, let your opinion be known. Would your readers like it? Did you? Is there anything you would change? Don’t leave anything out. If you remember it, then it’s worth mentioning.

Get creative and have fun. Good luck!

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Taking the Initiative

 Motivation, Organization, Writing  Comments Off on Taking the Initiative
Dec 182006
 

After weeks of waiting, the last few responses in reference to my short story Foiled finally arrived.  Each letter contained a depressing, but standard rejection. After talking to my sister about it, she gave me this great idea. I am going to make postcards that give editors a chance to respond in a way that will help me re-work my piece for publication. What this means is that I will create a postcard, which will say something like so:

We thank you for your submission however; we feel your piece needs:

–More character development.

–Work on the dialogue.

–Work on either the tone of the piece or the timing.

–Plot development.

–To be submitted elsewhere because we do not publish this type of fiction.

Thank you and good luck in the future.

Sincerely,

Me

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Where is everybody?

 Connecting  Comments Off on Where is everybody?
Nov 272006
 

While recently speaking to a friend of mine about the woes of finding others that are into writing and creating like myself, he said that I should add a message board to my site. At the very least, I thought that I could open this up for discussion. Where are all of the writers, creative people at? Chicago is a huge city, filled with all types of artists. I just cannot believe that artists aren’t getting together and creating. The reason there seems to be more opportunities for writers, artists, actors, producers, etc. in other cities is because there are, but there has to be somebody out there doing something right? This same friend mentioned that Kelly Tsai, (we went to the same college) is now a full time poet living in Brooklyn. Congrats Kelly Tsai. To see what Kelly is up to, please visit her at http://www.yellowgurl.com/.

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Can you walk the walk?

 Writing  Comments Off on Can you walk the walk?
Nov 012006
 

Do you have a story idea bouncing around your head that just won’t go away? Have you been thinking about it for the last couple of months, maybe even years? If you can’t take it anymore, then it’s time to put it to the page. It’s time to take advantage of Nanowrimo! What’s that you ask? It’s a web site created by Chris Long who wrote the book, No Plot? No Problem! Nanowrimo is all about the power of deadlines. This is how it works: you have 30 days beginning November 1st to complete a 50,000 word novel. I did it last year and it was amazing so I’m working at it again this year. If you need a writing buddy, look me up: Circle68. For more information, please visit: http://www.nanowrimo.org/

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One Reject to Another

 Literary Mags and Journals, Motivation  Comments Off on One Reject to Another
Oct 242006
 

I get home, throw my bag to the floor and pick up the mail. While sorting through it I spot an envelope that looks strikingly familiar. Oh yes, it’s the SASE I sent with my short story for their response. They’ve finally written back. YES! Soon, all of the excitement is washed away by the awful unknown. What if they hated it? Ugh. I graciously tear open the envelope and pull the slip out. It says, “Thank you so much for submitting your fiction piece to our fine publication, however we are not interested at this time. Good luck in the future.” Damn!

Four rejection slips later, I’m sitting in my office pouring myself another glass of cheap red wine, (dare I say the name) staring at a very sharp X-acto Knife sitting to my left. I should just end it all! I have no talent. What am I doing? Who wants to hear what I have to say anyway? But then I think damn it, I do. So, I’ve decide to look for other avenues.

I only need one magazine to like it anyway. At the very least I’d like some sound writing advice about my piece. I don’t know what I’m doing wrong. Maybe the plot isn’t strong enough, the dialogue too dry. Who knows? But I want answers. So, I’ve decide not to wait around any longer. I’ve sent it out to two more publications. Hey, you never know.

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They say rejection is killer. Who am I to argue?

 Literary Mags and Journals, Submit  Comments Off on They say rejection is killer. Who am I to argue?
Oct 062006
 

After months of re-writing and editing my short story Foiled, I was ready. I grabbed a cup of coffee and my Novel & Short Story Writer’s Market and I went to work. I scoured every literary magazine listing and marked the ones I thought would be perfect for my piece. With post it notes in hand, I began writing down tiny tidbits about the pubs I liked most because I’d heard over the years that I should know the market that I was pitching to. But knowing those markets takes a lot of time and research and it was mostly the time that I was missing. So I did what all writers do, I made time by staying up late and turning off the television set.

I found it virtually impossible to find a free literary magazine. I think this is mainly because many literary magazines are dependent on donations or they’re simply scraping by so they need charge $10 + dollars an issue. Sample issues still cost money and to a beginner without the necessary cash, it begins to add up. So, I improvised and read the recently published samples on their web site. I also read the submission guidelines. You must do this for every magazine. You don’t want to look like an amateur that doesn’t know how to follow the rules do you? You may even find information about deadlines, their magazine schedule and the names of specific editors. It’s called research.

There are literary magazines available at your local library or at independent bookstores. There are a ton of indie bookstores in Chicago, but this is and always will be my favorite:

Quimby’s
1854 W North Ave
Chicago, IL 60622
(773) 342-0910
www.quimbys.com/

I narrowed down the thirty-five plus literary magazines I initially picked to ten according to the type of fiction they requested. I also took into consideration if they published short stories by writers that won either the Pushcart award or some other literary award. You never know who may be reading your work. And in some cases lit agents are using these magazines as a way to find new and upcoming writers. That’s definitely something you should keep in mind.

I wrote a very simple cover letter, pieced it together with my story and enclosed a SASE for their response. I chucked them in my backpack and took them to the point of no return — the U.S. Post Office.

As of today, October 6th, I’ve heard from one literary magazine telling me that they weren’t going to start reviewing fiction again until October 1st, 2006. I believe they received my story on September 26, 2006, so they’re obviously serious about their deadlines. I’m still waiting to hear from the other magazines, and I’m hoping for good feedback if my story is rejected. My fingers are crossed.

I realize that writing short stories will land me in the poor house and that if I continue to pursue it, it may sentence me to a life of eating beans from a can, but I like creative writing. I do. I’d rather put all of my money eggs into my books or articles basket, but I need the release.

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You can’t Kill Passion

 Writing  Comments Off on You can’t Kill Passion
Sep 212006
 

A small bonfire burns inside of each one of us and it’s up to us to feed the fire; to create a blaze so magnificent that all of the world can see it from wherever they are. And no matter how far we walk to gather the firewood or how many obstacles we dodge along the way there always seems to be one, two or ten people waiting to drown us out when we get back. 

On numerous occasions, I’ve been around people who try to plant those tiny, Langolier eating, self-doubting seeds deep into my brain whenever I tell them about my writing plans. I’ve heard everything from well, nobody is happy with their job to stop living in a dream world. I’m curious to know why striving for happiness equates living in a dream world? My dreams satisfy my soul. 

Don’t get me wrong, I appreciate realism, but many times, the advice I receive isn’t practical. It’s downright negative. It’s like the disgruntled divorcee who feels the need to tell the young newlywed that her marriage is doomed to fail at every possible opportunity. Don’t you think I’ve weighed the options? Don’t you think I’ve created my own pros and cons list? 

Yes, I am aware of the possibility of failure, but do I constantly have to be reminded by someone that has never reached their own dreams that I am going to fail? I know that words, in the most simplistic terms are just words, but they work wonders when said in the right way, to the right person, at the right time, but I do have a point.

If others aren’t going to feed your fire, don’t dwell on it. It’s essential that you keep yourself positive and motivated enough to create. Just continue to plow away, because if you don’t, what do you have left? 

This reminds me of a quote I’ve been reading daily for the last six months: 

Listening to you inner guidance system is not only something you should do to be a better person. It is also a practice that, when done daily, will wipe out the problems as silly as the ones you face today.

 

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