Sep 062011

It’s Rachael Harrie’s first campaign challenge. Here are the rules: Write a short story/flash fiction story in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, including a poem. Begin the story with the words, “The door swung open” These four words will be included in the word count. If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional), use the same beginning words and end with the words: “the door swung shut.” Also included in the word count. For those who want an even greater challenge, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!

Here is my entry, which is exactly 200 words btw. Check it out below:

The door swung open. She was surrounded by the most beautiful things. Rows upon rows of books with classic spines lined up against each other, standing on dark wooden bookcases affixed to the walls behind them. There were four tables in the middle which formed a perfect square and in the center, the marble bust of an unknown man. A bulbous pencil sharpener sat in the corner and on each table was an orange colored lantern, which brightened up the space on the dullest of evenings. It was the most wondrous library she had ever seen. It was the room in his house she wished she owned, but felt blessed to be invited to.

His world consisted of this newly inherited house from his mother who recently passed, of leather bound books with golden pages, of luck. She let her hand pass against the hardbacks, smooth, then lumpy until she found a thin one with a red, leather spine; The Velveteen Rabbit.

She flipped through it. The scent of old passed through her nostrils, of experience, of regret. Oh yes, she was in heaven.

“Lunch?” he called out.

As she made her way towards the exit, the door swung shut.


Thanks for reading!


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  51 Responses to “First Campaign Challenge Submission”

  1. Hi Nina. Lovely to come back to your blog. I’ve tagged you in a game of 10 random facts about yourself. For details of what it entails, see my post here:

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